Sold To The Mafia For A Million Dollars Reviews

AWFUL! so many name mistakes throughout the book, grammar and spelling mistakes too! The story line itself was good but it drags on ALOT. The author has mixed two story lines together which was pointless. If I hadn’t already paid and unlocked all the chapters thinking it would be worth it, I wouldn’t of finished it. Skipped the last 7/8 chapters because I couldn’t be bothered to keep reading the same chapters over and over ( yes you unlock chapters but there’s multiple of the same ones!!!)

Loved the novel but was disappointed by the abrupt ending. All the suspenxe kept me engaged, but I was expecting more about her life as a wife of the head mafia. However treated their children stuff like that. The story line was great and love how Xander and Chase's stories interlinked. Overall a good book l, just wish it had a different ending. Does she become involved in the mafia business, or does she let him do it on her own. Do Chase and Lisa stay together afterhe is out of the hosanna less paranoid.

I wish it would have told what happened after the birth and if there family grew . Just not love enough what happened to his sister and brother and did his business grow . Also what happened to tge model ex girlfriend what happened to Ashley best friend. Did she learn to ba a proper mafia wife and did baby brother join the family business including the mafia. But all in all this was a good book just need to be longer

This story was written well but it didn’t have many grammatical errors throughout the story but it is still and enjoyable read. I think that the story if very faced paced considering it is two stories in one book with about thirty chapters each. I also got the names a bit confused and I feel the second story was introduced to weirdly. We are introduced to new characters we have no clue about I feel we could have go introduced to them in the fist story maybe Chase opens up when talking with Ashley or his sister, but overall a good story!

The plot is interesting, however, there are so many miss uses of words I have to go back and read sentences twice to understand what the author meant. I feel that it would be a great story without all of the mistakes. They are mostly small, simple words but enough to make it frustrating to continue reading at times. I really don't like that you have to write a minimum of eighty words to be able to leave a review

I liked the plot and story but to many inconsistencies in parts. Chase was he an NBA player a model or a football? They all were eluded to. Also I am not the best person with writing and editing but many there was a lot of messed up parts Character names the same for different people very confusing Same chapter 2 x and cost money both times disappointing Almost like using a very bad AI or was copying and pasting parts of other books to make this one.

The book was great to read, started out sad but then you get your happily ever after. Starts out with although parents then finding your dream man in a club, getting sold like a sack of potatoes, brought treated like a princess, bringing out the tender side to a mafia boss, then nearly getting murder finding out your pregnant and your man in a coma for nearly two months. But after all that the book was a very good read.

I loved the story but the misspelled words were a turn off and multiple times there were repeated paragraphs. I loved the love story of both Xander and Chase. For Xander that he saved his wife's life by buying her from the human auction and that she fit right into his Mafia life. And for Chase that he changed from his man whore life when he met Lisa. I actually liked this love story better than Xanders. That he changed his life for the love he felt for Lisa

So far I am really enjoying this novel. It is turning out to be very interesting. I like the story of Xander and Danielle, and now I can not wait to see what happens between Chase and Lisa. I really hope that something good happens for both couples. Xander and Danielle deserve happiness and I really hope that they find it. I hope Xander opens his eyes and realizes that Danielle is really perfect for him. I also hope that things work out for Chase and Lisa, they deserve happiness also.

I like the storyline. It’s different from several other mafia stories that I’ve read already. Buying his wife instead of an arranged marriage is a nice twist. I’m having a hard time with all the grammar errors. Also all the spelling issues. The peoples names a mixed up frequently. Writer wrote there were some issues going on in his life and he’d fix the issues as soon as he could. I guess he forgot because they are all over in the chapters.